Feedback Needed Please

Hi everyone, I wrote a blog trying to explain the different levels of skin care products to those outside of the industry, and I'd love some feedback on it. I have only published this to my friends, not on my professional skin care page or webstie yet, as I wanted to make sure it was professional enough and informative enough to do so. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks!

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Permalink Reply by Jodi on June 3, 2013 at 6:22am

Link didn't work. This one should

http://allaboutskinblog.blogspot.com/

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Permalink Reply by Samantha Maline on June 4, 2013 at 12:13pm

I love it. Very clear and concise and well-structured. If I could write like that I would. The information in the article is all correct and easy to understand for someone not educated in skin care which is important. Great article.

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Permalink Reply by Jodi on June 4, 2013 at 1:41pm

Thank you! Appreciate the feedback!

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Permalink Reply by Jodi on June 5, 2013 at 11:58am

Here is another one I just wrote! I'd love more feedback. Also, anyone who has a blog, how do you get followers? I've shared my blog on facebook, but can't seem to get followers to it. Any ideas would be great. Thansk!

http://allaboutskinblog.blogspot.com/2013/06/why-skin-care-is-not-l...

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Permalink Reply by Jodi on June 5, 2013 at 6:52pm

How do you your facebook pages/blogs/websites out to the masses beyond your own friends and family? I've tried Facebook sharing contests, only got a few bites on those, I shared my blog on facebook and twitter. I'm just kind of stuck at how to get my name and information out there beyond what I have. Any ideas would be greatly appreciated!

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Permalink Reply by Brittnee on June 5, 2013 at 9:59pm

Hi Jodi, I think its great. It bascially speaking to clients and potential clients on a level they can understand. I think sometime when we use big words ( I know I do sometimes), it can confuse them. Yes it does look better when we use them, but I think when blogging they would like to relate. And that you did. I personally done a couple of blogs, but in the same position about getting viewers. Keep up the good work.

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Permalink Reply by Jodi on June 6, 2013 at 5:41am

Thank you! I'm happy to hear that! Now we just have to figure out how to get our blogs out to the masses!

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Permalink Reply by Jodi on June 6, 2013 at 7:07pm

So here is what I did today. I created a new Twitter account just for skin care to share my tips and blog. I created a google+ account, but I'm not sure how to use that one yet. I linked my blog to my LinkedIn, my Pinterest, my ASCP website, and my FB page. And wrote 2 more blog posts. I've always been an amatuer writer, so I'm really enjoying this. Thanks everyone for the feedback! It's much appreciated!

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Permalink Reply by Devyn M. on June 10, 2013 at 11:33am

Time and patience like I told you on FB. :) It's frustrating sometimes b/c you're anxious to get the information out there but eventually people will follow. I've been doing it for about a year now and it has just been picking up in the last few months. In fact, my blog got noticed my some website in New Jersey and is going to be featured on their site this month. It's fun when something like that happens.

Twitter- Start following other people that relate to what you are doing. That is how I have gotten a lot of my followers.

There are so many tips to get followers and it has taken me a lot of time to figure it out. Get online and read about social media. They will tell you what the best ways are for each site. Easy and very helpful.