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Permalink Reply by Lauren Snow, ASCP on June 26, 2012 at 12:13pm

Way to go! It looks very nice!

 

You should add more about yourself- tell your clients more about you and your interests so when they come see you they feel like they already know a little about you!

ASCP's website builder is so nice! I haven't finished mine yet, but I will post when I do!

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Permalink Reply by Tabatha Potter on June 28, 2012 at 7:37am

Yeah, I always have a hard time with the "about me" things.  Thank you and I look forward to seeing yours when it's done 8 )

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Permalink Reply by Deborah Kenney on June 26, 2012 at 10:19pm

I like it -agree with Lauren. I didn't go through every page but I did notice a couple of things

On the wax page "All prices start as"-I would change it to at, and I would add your max rate (least hairy to the most hairy).  And there's a e left out of eyebrow on the 35 full face.

I think it is so hard to proofread your own stuff. Hope you don't mind my two cents!

 

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Permalink Reply by Tabatha Potter on June 28, 2012 at 7:37am

Oh my! Thank you so much! I call myself the grammar police! ; ) 

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Permalink Reply by Allison Ault on June 28, 2012 at 9:40am

Hi!

Great website! It looks very clean. I have a few suggestions. I noticed the font on some of the pages is different. That can make it a little difficult to read when scrolling through the site. Usually, people will have different fonts for different hierarchies (i.e. Page Title, Sub Titles, Page text) but those styles remain consistent across all pages.

Also, I think it's a little difficult to read the way it is centered. You may try tightening up the text by using a table in the web builder. I would also suggest using a table with two columns for your pricing. That way the pricing and services are lined up and it is easier to see.

I noticed that you haven't registered your website with Google yet (on Google, searching "site:treatmentsbytabathaj.skincaretherapy.net" yields no results which means it hasn't been indexed). So people won't be able to find your site.

If you want some additional tips and advice on search engine optimization and search engine marketing you can call me. There are several things you can do to your website that will help you get closer to the top in Google searches. I work in the membership department at ASCP 800-789-0411 x654.

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Permalink Reply by Deborah Kenney on June 28, 2012 at 7:52pm

Apreciate your info -I haven't finished mine either. I do have the sister site for massage. Just dragging my feet on all this internet site. I do get googled at least once a week for massage so I know it works!

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